In a quandry
May. 31st, 2007 11:48 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
valarltdOK,
so EC got back to me about Burning for Eight Days. (it's flocked, ping me if you're not friended)
1) the lez has to go. No f/f.
2) Needs more plot.
So, here is the question:
Do I revise...yet again, or do I just say "no thanks" and send it to Phaze for the Frost heatsheet?
I already submitted an earlier draft as a Frost when I hadn't head from EC.
The biggest problem with Phaze is the barJonas twins from Burning are the same as the benEzra twins that I submitted for the Frontier heat-sheet.
so EC got back to me about Burning for Eight Days. (it's flocked, ping me if you're not friended)
1) the lez has to go. No f/f.
2) Needs more plot.
So, here is the question:
Do I revise...yet again, or do I just say "no thanks" and send it to Phaze for the Frost heatsheet?
I already submitted an earlier draft as a Frost when I hadn't head from EC.
The biggest problem with Phaze is the barJonas twins from Burning are the same as the benEzra twins that I submitted for the Frontier heat-sheet.
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Re: Your call, hon.
Date: 2007-06-02 03:39 am (UTC)Maybe postpone the deal with Daddy until Valentine's and get a failed romance with the real Sean and have her tempted to retreat to her box instead...
But that doesn't feel like plot, it feels like a scene, and I'm not sure imploding romances sell.