In a quandry

[valarltd]

OK,
so EC got back to me about Burning for Eight Days. (it's flocked, ping me if you're not friended)

1) the lez has to go. No f/f.
2) Needs more plot.

So, here is the question:
Do I revise...yet again, or do I just say "no thanks" and send it to Phaze for the Frost heatsheet?

I already submitted an earlier draft as a Frost when I hadn't head from EC.

The biggest problem with Phaze is the barJonas twins from Burning are the same as the benEzra twins that I submitted for the Frontier heat-sheet.

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I know it's bad form and I've been knotted up for a couple months about this, ever since I found out EC didn't lose it in the slush pile like I thought. (It was well after Christmas, I figured they wouldn't want it)

Phaze is going to get a really nice note saying "I'm so sorry, here, please have two guys celebrating the solstice" (or something similar)

This is not a "God, I'll die if they change one word of my deathless prose" piece. It's just a "oh crap, here we go again, and I have no idea what to do about the plot part."

I do have a solution for the lesbian scene tho'. The sex goes, and the talk and booze stay