Five things

For eyeless_angel
( 5 things Han Solo would *never* do, no matter what the profit. )

( 5 changes Morgenstern would love to make to his academy, but shouldn't )

For idadebeautreux
( Five Things Wolverine Wanted to Say to the Writers of X-Men III )

For thefannishwaldo
( 5 times Spock smiled, but McCoy wasn't looking. )

For pickingroses
( five things Spike wishes he did, before he got a soul )

Need a beta who likes dystopia and romance

So I got this novel.

It's been rejected about 3 times. This tells me there's a problem with it.
I'm too close to the problem.

dakiwiboid read the early draft and gave me some wonderful help. At her suggestion, I have punched up the SF portion of it.

What I need is to improve the romance portion before I send it out.
Apparently, I also head-hop (change PoV) during scenes. This is not something I notice in reading or writing, so watching for that would be helpful, too.

Warning, it is explicitly male/male, and most of the characters are complete rotters.
Drop a comment and I'll send it along.

Only payment I can promise is a copy when we finally get it published.

You know your muses are out of control when:

1) Hanging is considered foreplay

2) The words "I am a werewolf, not a dog. The litterbox is not my personal snack-tray." come up

3) Martinis routinely include "things" other than the gin or vodka.

4) The only problem with sleeping with a pair of identical twins is what to do with the elbows.

5) The only problem involved in sleeping with your twin brother is he's jealous of the twins in #4

6) Your daddy sends you virtual sex toys.

7) They start making inside jokes that only the other muses get and you just go "huh?"


Brats.