HALLLLP!

[valarltd]

They want a happy ending!

By God, I gave 'em a happy ending: the couple is together, the problem is sort of resolved, and they're talking about the future while they cuddle and kiss.

But it's not happy enough. Anyone willing to advise on a very very kinky gay story?

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[morgan-lowri.livejournal.com]

And if that's mostly resolved and there are cuddles and kisses, what's the problem?

[valarltd.livejournal.com]

I just added a little more, playing with some things that didn't get as developed as I would have liked. And showing a great deal more affection.

[morgan-lowri.livejournal.com]

Aww, that should work nicely. ^_^

I have to say though, I prefer a natural if slightly awkward ending over one that's rushed to the HEA.