HALLLLP!

[valarltd]

They want a happy ending!

By God, I gave 'em a happy ending: the couple is together, the problem is sort of resolved, and they're talking about the future while they cuddle and kiss.

But it's not happy enough. Anyone willing to advise on a very very kinky gay story?

Comments

[dragovianknight.livejournal.com]

How are they defining "happy"?

[valarltd.livejournal.com]

not a clue. I suppose with soppiness

[dragovianknight.livejournal.com]

See, I figure if everyone is a) alive b) reasonably intact physically and mentally and c) together, it's a happy ending. Are my standards of "happy" too low?

[valarltd.livejournal.com]

Not really.
but I'm sapping it up just a little at the end.

Not like they're settling down to open a combination dungeon/puppy farm, but they're making out on the loveseat.

[winterknight.livejournal.com]

See, now I want to write about two guys who raise puppies and run a dungeon. *laughs* Because. I'm all about kink and puppies. Separately, mind. :p Very separately. *cough*

[winterknight.livejournal.com]

I'll chat about it with you. Want to IM me? What program are you using? Or email works, if you prefer. Just let me know.

[valarltd.livejournal.com]

I'm on AIM: asparrow16

[morgan-lowri.livejournal.com]

Um. That sounds happy to me. They want sunshine out someone's ass or something? Not all stories in in ZOMG soulmates!...not that I mind the ones that do, but still.

[valarltd.livejournal.com]

they're already soul mates. they just hit a dark night of the soul.

[morgan-lowri.livejournal.com]

And if that's mostly resolved and there are cuddles and kisses, what's the problem?

[valarltd.livejournal.com]

I just added a little more, playing with some things that didn't get as developed as I would have liked. And showing a great deal more affection.

[morgan-lowri.livejournal.com]

Aww, that should work nicely. ^_^

I have to say though, I prefer a natural if slightly awkward ending over one that's rushed to the HEA.