In a quandry
May. 31st, 2007 11:48 amOK,
so EC got back to me about Burning for Eight Days. (it's flocked, ping me if you're not friended)
1) the lez has to go. No f/f.
2) Needs more plot.
So, here is the question:
Do I revise...yet again, or do I just say "no thanks" and send it to Phaze for the Frost heatsheet?
I already submitted an earlier draft as a Frost when I hadn't head from EC.
The biggest problem with Phaze is the barJonas twins from Burning are the same as the benEzra twins that I submitted for the Frontier heat-sheet.
so EC got back to me about Burning for Eight Days. (it's flocked, ping me if you're not friended)
1) the lez has to go. No f/f.
2) Needs more plot.
So, here is the question:
Do I revise...yet again, or do I just say "no thanks" and send it to Phaze for the Frost heatsheet?
I already submitted an earlier draft as a Frost when I hadn't head from EC.
The biggest problem with Phaze is the barJonas twins from Burning are the same as the benEzra twins that I submitted for the Frontier heat-sheet.
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Date: 2007-06-02 03:24 am (UTC)Some stuff is brilliant
Ariel and David benEzra look, act and sound almost exactly like Mishael and David barJonas. Identical twins, both brilliant, one more techy.
The stories aren't the same but are both cyberpunkish. In "Pushing the boundaries of reality" they are seducing a netrunner and trying to bring things out of the net and into the real world.
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Date: 2007-06-03 10:44 pm (UTC)Karen Scott