Need a beta

[valarltd]

I finished de-kinking my story for Torquere.
I need a second set of eyes to look it over. Anyone interested in original charactere (m/m) being naughty?

All I can offer is appreciation and virtual chocolate.

Thanks.

Comments

[dragon-lord.livejournal.com]

What are you looking for in a beta? Spelling, grammar, flow, plot?

[valarltd.livejournal.com]

Mostly flow, plot, continuity (Make sure I don't still have him fucking the gearshift, and especially make sure I didn't have him climb off it a third time) and "does it work."

Any egregious spelling errors or grammatical mistakes.
(I tend to be pretty good about stuff like that)

[dragon-lord.livejournal.com]

If you still need someone, I can do it.

I can take doc, txt, rtf files if you want to send it to lovely.evil.one at gmail.com

[valarltd.livejournal.com]

It bounced. Does Gmail not take mail from Hotmail?

[dragon-lord.livejournal.com]

That's very odd, it should have gone through. O.o

[valarltd.livejournal.com]

I sent it via your LJ address, so double check.