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valarltd ([personal profile] valarltd) wrote2005-02-09 11:53 am

Need a beta

I finished de-kinking my story for Torquere.
I need a second set of eyes to look it over. Anyone interested in original charactere (m/m) being naughty?

All I can offer is appreciation and virtual chocolate.

Thanks.

[identity profile] dragon-lord.livejournal.com 2005-02-10 03:07 am (UTC)(link)
What are you looking for in a beta? Spelling, grammar, flow, plot?

[identity profile] valarltd.livejournal.com 2005-02-10 03:27 am (UTC)(link)
Mostly flow, plot, continuity (Make sure I don't still have him fucking the gearshift, and especially make sure I didn't have him climb off it a third time) and "does it work."

Any egregious spelling errors or grammatical mistakes.
(I tend to be pretty good about stuff like that)

[identity profile] dragon-lord.livejournal.com 2005-02-10 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
If you still need someone, I can do it.

I can take doc, txt, rtf files if you want to send it to lovely.evil.one at gmail.com

[identity profile] valarltd.livejournal.com 2005-02-10 07:49 pm (UTC)(link)
It bounced. Does Gmail not take mail from Hotmail?

[identity profile] dragon-lord.livejournal.com 2005-02-11 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
That's very odd, it should have gone through. O.o

[identity profile] valarltd.livejournal.com 2005-02-11 03:06 am (UTC)(link)
I sent it via your LJ address, so double check.