i have to admit it's getting better, getting better all the time

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Ellora's Cave asked for the full manuscript of Glad Hands. I went over it again, just to make sure. I'd fixed a lot of errors on the last edit. I missed the spine trees of Kentucky, though. They're just ordinary pines now.

But yes, this is a woman who travels and knows Blytheville, Arkansas and Billings, Montana.
The only place I'm shaky on is Seattle, so I kept it pretty nondescript, except for the view out of Chuck's apartment of Puget Sound.

And oh how I love Chuck and Seven! The story is solid and exciting, the boys are sexy. And I make my readers wait until page 69 for that first love-making scene. (there's memories and masturbation before that)



And "Frosted Hearts" is finished for Phaze.
I need to bang away for a couple more hours at Niko-chan and Peregrine and get ahead because I'll be gone M-W of this week.

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[dragovianknight.livejournal.com]

Spine trees sound more like reannon's cup of tea.