final total

[valarltd]

finished it at last. word count, 3239
And it will get longer in edits.

Anyone want to beta this little bit of goofiness? All i can prmise in payment is an acknowledgement if it's accepted.

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[samcdermott65.livejournal.com]

I'll be winding up a beta I'm working on now within' the next day or so and could fit in a smallish piece. What's the deadline? Any specific concerns I should keep in mind? Payment? Never expect any. It's a labor of love for me. :)

shari

[valarltd.livejournal.com]

deadline is June 1

Main concern is story: plot and understandability.
Is it going to be too geeky for the average person?
Do I use too many convention specific terms?

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[samcdermott65.livejournal.com]

Got it.