In need of help

[valarltd]

Is there anyone out there willing to read a short story that's been rejected twice and beat me with a clue stick about it? I got a rejection slip for "For love of Etarin" again. And I need someone who isn't invested in it to look with fresh eyes.

The story is about 25 pages, m/m erotica.

Just leave a comment and I'll send you a copy. Thanks.

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[cbpotts.livejournal.com]

I'm game, if you'd like:

Cbpotts (at) gmail (dot) Com