Anyone up for a Narnia beta?

I just finished a New Year's Resolution story. It's Susan Pevensie/Jadis (The White Witch). It's very underage (Su is 12), but I tried to make it non-squicky and PG rated. Seduction comes in all types, and sexual is the least of them.

LMK if you would like to take a look.
Thanks.

Tuesday Talley

Nightstands assembled: 1
Wardrobes assembled: 1
Hours spent in Dr's office: 3
Hours spent having close personal relationship with Phillips Head Screwdriver: 5
Kids who won't sleep in the new bed: 1
Kids who won't sleep in their beds either: 2
Kids sleeping in a puppy-pile on the frontroom futon: 3
Kink chats from Torquere Press: 1
Stories drafted: 1
Stories beck from beta: 1 (thanks dakiwiboid
Narnia books I need to reread: 2

Ounces of Alcohol consumed: 3 (rum & coke and a blizzard)
Amount of swearing done: far too much.

Junk cleared out via Freecycle: 1 crib, lots of bedding and a twin bed that needs more attention than I can give it. (and hopefully a car seat)


I'm goin' to bed.