Dirty Dozen
Dec. 4th, 2011 03:55 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
valarltd12 sentences from a sex scene.
This is from Hard Reboot, and has dubious consent, fem sub, verbal abuse and implied twincest.
Tara began licking her way up Ariel's calf, pressing her lips and cheeks and forehead to it, worshiping him as she had been commanded. She reached his knee, pressing her breasts to his calf as she laid her head on his thigh. She stole a glance up and saw David had one arm around Ariel's waist and the other under his arm and behind his neck in a modified half-nelson. Ariel's eyes were shut and his breathing came shallow and fast.
“Suck his cock, bitch,” David snarled at her.
Tara moved up a little more and found Ariel was already hard. She ran her tongue over the whole of his cock, from root to crown, and around the ridge of the head. She swallowed him down, taking him as deeply as she could stand and just stroking with her tongue.
“Mine. Flesh of my flesh, bone of my bone,” she heard David say, the words clearly having a
meaning more than the usual. “Blood of my blood, self of myself.”
That was when Tara realized that to David, the twins were not separate people, but two halves of the same whole.
This is from Hard Reboot, and has dubious consent, fem sub, verbal abuse and implied twincest.
Tara began licking her way up Ariel's calf, pressing her lips and cheeks and forehead to it, worshiping him as she had been commanded. She reached his knee, pressing her breasts to his calf as she laid her head on his thigh. She stole a glance up and saw David had one arm around Ariel's waist and the other under his arm and behind his neck in a modified half-nelson. Ariel's eyes were shut and his breathing came shallow and fast.
“Suck his cock, bitch,” David snarled at her.
Tara moved up a little more and found Ariel was already hard. She ran her tongue over the whole of his cock, from root to crown, and around the ridge of the head. She swallowed him down, taking him as deeply as she could stand and just stroking with her tongue.
“Mine. Flesh of my flesh, bone of my bone,” she heard David say, the words clearly having a
meaning more than the usual. “Blood of my blood, self of myself.”
That was when Tara realized that to David, the twins were not separate people, but two halves of the same whole.
The D-Man Checks In
Tara moved up a little more and found Ariel was already hard.
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Unless Tara is blindfolded or is keeping her eyes closed, how would she not already know Ariel was already hard? Not to be indelicate, but certain things kinda stand out in a scene, unless Ariel's equipment is much smaller than normal.
Re: The D-Man Checks In
Date: 2011-12-07 08:06 pm (UTC)And before you ask "why didn't you say so?" let me remind you it is 12 sentences, not 12 paragraphs. The full text does say so