1) Errrr. Clearly you missed quite a few of my pieces. I've got the guys facing down a homophobic nurse who files an abuse charge against the able-bodied one of the pair. I have a gay bashing that doesn't quite go down. One of my characters got kidnapped, beaten and stabbed, and this is after he and his lover had to beat off a gay bashing earlier in the piece. I have whole countries where being gay (let alone acting on it) will get you sent to the hospital indefinitely or stoned to death.
There are some pieces, Master Bear, Chain Male, Alive on the Inside, where the characters are fairly open about things, within their own subcultures. (Chain-Male does make it clear the mechanic has gotten slugged a couple times for bad gaydar)
2) Lately, sex scenes have gotten tedious. Which is why Power in the blood has several set up, more contemplated or remembered, but only one completed.
3) Most things are what they are. As Dee Kelley said, "No, I'm not going to explain what a tricorder does. That line is bullshit. A modern doctor doesn't explain his stethoscope." I don't need to explain how a perfectly ordinary library is laid out. Even if I do, the reader is going to superimpose their own "library" template on it.
I don't do a lot of physical description of characters, because it bogs things down. And because readers skip expository blocks.
"Don't tell me it's night. Show me the glitter of moonlight on broken glass."
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Re: The D-Man Checks In
Date: 2011-08-17 11:06 pm (UTC)There are some pieces, Master Bear, Chain Male, Alive on the Inside, where the characters are fairly open about things, within their own subcultures. (Chain-Male does make it clear the mechanic has gotten slugged a couple times for bad gaydar)
2) Lately, sex scenes have gotten tedious. Which is why Power in the blood has several set up, more contemplated or remembered, but only one completed.
3) Most things are what they are. As Dee Kelley said, "No, I'm not going to explain what a tricorder does. That line is bullshit. A modern doctor doesn't explain his stethoscope." I don't need to explain how a perfectly ordinary library is laid out. Even if I do, the reader is going to superimpose their own "library" template on it.
I don't do a lot of physical description of characters, because it bogs things down. And because readers skip expository blocks.
"Don't tell me it's night. Show me the glitter of moonlight on broken glass."
4) Duh, Romance! Kinda defines the genre.