Like Brit-picking, but with extra Jesus

[valarltd]

I find myself in need of help with POWER IN THE BLOOD. I have not voluntarily set foot in an evangelical church for upward of 10 years. I need several readers to be Christian-pickers, making sure I have not gone over the top with my evangelical vampires. I can send either the book as it stands (with sex and language) or just the scenes I need help on.

Also, beta readers willing to tell me what scenes are missing from the draft as it stands would be more than welcome.


*headdesk* I have written a book where a 50 yo man is having sex with his oldest son's boyfriend, and I'm worried about the RELIGION being over the top?

Comments

[mariadkins.livejournal.com]

lmao :)

send me what you need help with. when do you need it back?

[valarltd.livejournal.com]

Or would you like to have a look at the whole mess? I'm patchy, I know it, but I don't know what to patch things with, or where to patch.

[mariadkins.livejournal.com]

i'm afraid that the bits and pieces are all i can commit to just right now.

[valarltd.livejournal.com]

I'll pass them along tomorrow. This has to be in sept 1.

[mariadkins.livejournal.com]

shouldn't be any problem.