Like Brit-picking, but with extra Jesus
Aug. 10th, 2011 03:36 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
valarltdI find myself in need of help with POWER IN THE BLOOD. I have not voluntarily set foot in an evangelical church for upward of 10 years. I need several readers to be Christian-pickers, making sure I have not gone over the top with my evangelical vampires. I can send either the book as it stands (with sex and language) or just the scenes I need help on.
Also, beta readers willing to tell me what scenes are missing from the draft as it stands would be more than welcome.
*headdesk* I have written a book where a 50 yo man is having sex with his oldest son's boyfriend, and I'm worried about the RELIGION being over the top?
Also, beta readers willing to tell me what scenes are missing from the draft as it stands would be more than welcome.
*headdesk* I have written a book where a 50 yo man is having sex with his oldest son's boyfriend, and I'm worried about the RELIGION being over the top?
