First page Friday: Heart of A Forest

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Heart of A Forest
By Angelia Sparrow & Naomi Brooks
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Blurb:
In 1199, King Richard the Lion-Hearted lay dying in France. He commanded his lover, Sir David of Doncaster, to protect his small son by any means necessary.

Marion Fitzroy, princess of the blood on the wrong side of the blankets, now lives a constrained life in Nottingham castle, dreaming of her childhood betrothed, the son of the Earl of Locksley. As the Barons’ War rages around her uncle King John, her dispossessed fiancé—now called Robin Hood—and his merry irregulars make life miserable for Phillip, the sheriff of Nottingham. And fires Marion’s blood.

Robin, for his part, is about to learn the secret that Marion guards with her life. Thwarting Phillip’s gambits for Marion’s hand, a doubled price on his head, even shooting for an arrow of pure gold all pale next to the pleasures to be had under Marion’s skirts, deep in the heart of Sherwood Forest.

But Marion is no ordinary woman, no ordinary princess. In fact, her body isn’t a woman's at all.

First page under the cut.
Not quite work safe


First Page:
Chapter One
A Good Tight Butcher
Nottingham Castle, 1216

Marion watched the handsome man in Lincoln green move through the market crowd. She wished she could be down among the people, although it was not at all seemly for a princess, even an unacknowledged one. She was never permitted out of Nottingham Castle without a guard.

But she could look. She leaned on the heavy stone railing of the balcony and watched, pretending to look at all the people doing their marketing on this fine May morning but focusing on him. He stood half a head taller than most of the men he passed. She would come to his chin, possibly his nose. His fair hair shone in the sunlight where he’d pushed back the dark brown hood.

She leaned out more for a better look and her motion caught his eye. He looked straight at her. At the sight of his handsome face focused solely on her, Marion’s insides felt most peculiar, as if she were both too hot and too cold at the same time. Her stomach behaved most unusually as well, first rising as if to choke her and then falling down into her shoes.

When he smiled, just for her, all of her organs fluttered as if in greeting. Before she could stop herself or think of propriety, she waved a kerchief to him. In return, he pressed a kiss to the palm of his own hand and flung it upward to her, garnering a nasty look from a baker whose tray he nearly overturned.

Marion felt as if the kiss had landed squarely upon her mouth. The idea of being kissed by the tall man with the laughing mouth and fair hair made her tingle and her prick twitched. She looked down to make sure it wasn’t showing through her skirts. Her old nurse, Bess, was very strict about how nice ladies looked and stiff pricks were not allowed. She tended to scold Marion for even waking up hard, as if she herself didn’t wake jutting as well.

Marion remembered once, as a child, she had amused herself by trying to piss on the head of one of her uncle’s guards. Her stream fell short, but Bess snatched her away from the window so fast there was a mark on her arm for a day and she had landed hard on her bottom.

That was when Bess had explained that the primary difference between boys and girls was that boys were proud of their pricks and flaunted them, while girls needed to be modest.

The man was still staring up at her. The smile on his face made her prick twitch again. That was unseemly too and Bess would chide her. She returned the smile and gave a small wave of her fingers, then dashed away from the railing and back into her apartments before she could be tempted to more wicked thoughts.

Comments

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I'm in the thick of things! Is it ok that I am on the edge of my seat and at the same laughing my butt off? I am having a blast reading this story!!!

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It's fine. We love to hear that we made a reader laugh...assuming it's not a "lolwhut?" moment where there is a question whether the character came or wet herself.

[latetocomics.livejournal.com]

ha! nope - it's all good. I was serious - I've enjoyed reading, and I feel like you've captured all the old movies with Errol Flynn and I hope it was as much fun to write as I've had reading.