Adventures in editing
Jul. 26th, 2007 11:42 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
valarltdIn interests of maintaining decent author-editor relations, I have removed the names of the offenders.
Dramatis Personae:
E=Editor
A=Angel, your humble narrator
E: "More sex!"
A: "It's 9 sex scenes with a framing plot"
E: "oh yeah."
A: *punches up sex*
E: "Needs more plot!"
E: Flush out the emotions.
A: With what, a diuretic? *mumbles* I do hope she means flesh out
E: Is that position possible? I can't tell who's sucking what.
A: No, I thought I'd throw in a zero-gee clusterfuck. Hey, it's science fiction. And BTW, "wetware" is one word, like hardware and software.
E: "More cowbell!"
A: Buh-zuh?
Dramatis Personae:
E=Editor
A=Angel, your humble narrator
E: "More sex!"
A: "It's 9 sex scenes with a framing plot"
E: "oh yeah."
A: *punches up sex*
E: "Needs more plot!"
E: Flush out the emotions.
A: With what, a diuretic? *mumbles* I do hope she means flesh out
E: Is that position possible? I can't tell who's sucking what.
A: No, I thought I'd throw in a zero-gee clusterfuck. Hey, it's science fiction. And BTW, "wetware" is one word, like hardware and software.
E: "More cowbell!"
A: Buh-zuh?
