depends on what your going for. The first sounds like a true beginning to a nasty porn. The second sounds like - well - a novella of some sorts, not sure Id read it, but - its definitely interesting.
are you online and hiding today, dear friend? I was going to give you my address... and talk to you about our darling Nicko-chan... *giggles*
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Date: 2005-12-22 09:28 pm (UTC)are you online and hiding today, dear friend? I was going to give you my address... and talk to you about our darling Nicko-chan... *giggles*