advice welcome

[valarltd]

Revising INTO DARK WATERS. Reformatting, adding stories.
Here's the lineup. Taking suggestions on moving them around. Five Time Loser and Hunger for the edge need space between them. As do Deadman's curve and Tuition fees.

I've cut Crossroads, and will be putting it into a threeway collection

“Tuition Fees”--mysterious school demands a high tuition (paranormal)
“FiveTime Loser” --trucker carries on a late-night romance(paranormal)
“Talk Like a Pirate Day” --playtime in the shadow of death (contemporary)
“Sideshow Roses” --Torturo has a valentine poresent for Nick (dark carnival)
“His Wicked Way” --Nick gets a new piercing (dark carnival)
“Paying Forfeits”--gamesmen play for kinky forfeits (contemp)
“Hunger for the Edge” --A vampire samples the nightlife (paranormal)
“Serpents” --A djinn and a naga in love (paranormal)
“Blood Rubies”--treasure hunting (pirates)
“Deadman's Curve”--An undead stripper falls for his demonic boss (paranormal)
“Plumbing the Depths” --heroes out of mothballs for one last mission (SF)