State of the Sooky
May. 23rd, 2012 08:56 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
valarltdToday was Mudd's last day of school. On June 4 I start the Jackson run, doing linehaul instead of transloading. Kids have to go tomorrow.
Writing: 1671 words on DJ. Story is at 28K
Editing: Starting chapter 4 of Hard Reboot. Got D's final commentary, so had to go over the first 3 again. Having a "Must Not Axe Murder Collaborator" Day. Sweetie, you miss the point. When I take it out, I take it out for a reason. Mainly because I don't want it in there. Don't stick that adverb or weasel word or faux-Gorean bullshit back in. The audience knows she's a slave. We don't need to remind them every third page.
Reading: Skin Trade
Workout: none
Flying: Swish & Swipe,
Crafting: none
Media: none
Business: mailed contract for Carved in Flesh
Writing: 1671 words on DJ. Story is at 28K
Editing: Starting chapter 4 of Hard Reboot. Got D's final commentary, so had to go over the first 3 again. Having a "Must Not Axe Murder Collaborator" Day. Sweetie, you miss the point. When I take it out, I take it out for a reason. Mainly because I don't want it in there. Don't stick that adverb or weasel word or faux-Gorean bullshit back in. The audience knows she's a slave. We don't need to remind them every third page.
Reading: Skin Trade
Workout: none
Flying: Swish & Swipe,
Crafting: none
Media: none
Business: mailed contract for Carved in Flesh
