Adventures in editing

[valarltd]

In interests of maintaining decent author-editor relations, I have removed the names of the offenders.

Dramatis Personae:
E=Editor
A=Angel, your humble narrator

E: "More sex!"
A: "It's 9 sex scenes with a framing plot"
E: "oh yeah."
A: *punches up sex*
E: "Needs more plot!"

E: Flush out the emotions.
A: With what, a diuretic? *mumbles* I do hope she means flesh out

E: Is that position possible? I can't tell who's sucking what.
A: No, I thought I'd throw in a zero-gee clusterfuck. Hey, it's science fiction. And BTW, "wetware" is one word, like hardware and software.

E: "More cowbell!"
A: Buh-zuh?

Comments

[sailorcelestial.livejournal.com]

May I just say, WTF?

[valarltd.livejournal.com]

I confess, I made the last one up.